Song as a birthday gift

Hey guys, a very close friend of mine is having her birthday soon and I really wanted to impress her and do something quite new. So I decided to make her a song in the piano. The problem is....well I want people to listen to it and tell me what they think and if you think it would make a good birthday present or have I created a very repetitive disaster xD. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PZ9QPSom0ew Honest opinions pleasee good or bad :)

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